I don't think I'd want to do cleans in a circuit like that either. But if I were to rate the shoulder hurting potential I really hate upright rows. The thing is it's the context of it too. It's like right things, stacked on wrong things, stacked on ok things, stacked on wrong things. But I'd take out cleans too, at least a step in the right direction. An even better step would be for you coach to visit a few web sites, read a few books...heck they have a whole site dedicated to football training...lots of stuff on weights. Then there's us guys
But I really don't have a lot of personal experience with circuits. Just plenty experience with screwed up shoulders.